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BECOMING BELOVED's avatar

DO NOT STOP WRITING!

You real and deep.

You also pulled your lyrics/song from a very original place ... Even David! How about that.

Do you ever critique others lyrics? I lost my sister to Scleroderma a few years ago. Wrote her a song - raw but started polishing it. Not ready to share with friends or singer/songwriters I am close with.

Would you be willing to bounce thoughts/changes off my writing if I posted this one?

My other couple post are from my devotional - not lyrics.

I am going to follow you.

Just hearing this one song, as a music lover, please keep writing!!!

Your words reach deep.

TYVM for sharing!

Alissa Klenk's avatar

I’d love to read your lyrics!

BECOMING BELOVED's avatar

So sweet. I'll get courageous and post here this weekend. The one is out of them"raw" and now needs some tips.

TY

Keep writing!